[E]very year, about twice as many people are killed in the United States by guns than die of terrorist attacks worldwide.Update: It took me longer than it should have to figure out what's wrong with this phrasing., but now I've got it: It's a lack of parallelism. (And the use of different verbs doesn't help.) The fix is simple: ". . . twice as many people are killed
Sunday, July 14, 2013
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