Wednesday, December 19, 2007

A good beginning

A while back I raved about the opening paragraph of Moby Dick - and, indeed, about the whole of the first chapter. I stand by that judgment. Given what happens later in the book, I can't imagine two better sentences than:
Some years ago - never mind how long precisely - having little or no money in my purse, and nothing particular to interest me on shore, I thought I would sail about a little and see the watery part of the world. It is a way I have of driving off the spleen and regulating the circulation.
Nevertheless, try this one on for size:
Marley was dead, to begin with. There is no doubt whatever about that. The register of his burial was signed by the clergyman, the clerk, the undertaker, and the chief mourner. Scrooge signed it. And Scrooge's name was good upon 'Change, for anything he chose to put his hand to.

Old Marley was as dead as a door-nail.

Mind! I don't mean to say that I know, of my own knowledge, what there is particularly dead about a door-nail. I might have been inclined, myself, to regard a coffin-nail as the deadest piece of ironmongery in the trade. But the wisdom of our ancestors is in the simile; and my unhallowed hands shall not disturb it, or the Country's done for. You will therefore permit me to repeat, emphatically, that Marley was as dead as a door-nail.

OK, so that's 3 paragraphs. Sue me. It is great writing! You can get the entire text here.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

You are correct...it is excellent imagry.

I am reading a biography of Abraham Lincoln. Some of the quotes that are attributed to Lincoln are rather neat also (See, on slouch in me when it comes to waxing poetic.)

Jack